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11月11日雅思大作文真題參考范文 | 專業人士是否應該有更高的薪資?

11月11日雅思大作文真題參考范文 | 專業人士是否應該有更高的薪資?

發布時間:2021-11-17 關鍵詞:雅思大作文
摘要: 11月11日雅思大作文真題參考范文,專業人士是否應該有更高的薪資?

  2021年11月11雅思大作文題目

  Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses, and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the fields of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  With the outbreak of pandemics, more contributions of professionals such as doctors, nurses, and teachers have been witnessed by the public. Naturally, some propose that workers in aforementioned domains deserve higher salaries than those engaged in sports and entertainment do. Personally, I disagree with this proposal.

  解析

  老題新出,之前有過題目單討論運動員是否應該獲得高薪資。本題需要注意前后兩個群體的對比,從兩者的異同點進行比較。整體思路:不同意。都是社會分工下正常的職業,應該按個人在所在領域的貢獻和能力配比工資,而不是領域間進行整體工資比較。

  ? professional n. 專業人士,專家(如醫生、律師等)

  ? aforementioned adj. 前面提到的

  ? deserve vt. 值得

  Body 1

  Irrefutably, workers with expertise do guarantee the basic survival of the public and conduce to the social soundness. Knowledgeable teachers, having made every effort to refine their knowledge and obtain relevant qualification, impart both theories and moral values to younger generations, which thus nurtures students into talents and injects vitality into all walks of life to ensure fundamental social development. Hospital staff, be they doctors or nurses, negotiate every impediment to save people’s lives by researching non-stop remedies and therapies or even sometimes risking their own lives. So many touching stories about them have been reported via media and even edited into documentaries during the impacts of COVID-19. Affirming their efforts and contributions, government has already issued certain policies to subsidize workers in those domains.

  解析

  承認專業人士對社會的貢獻(保障基本民生)以及這些群體可能面臨的風險。

  ? refine vt. 提煉

  ? impart sth. to sb. 給予某人某物(常跟抽象名詞)

  ? nurture vt. 培養

  ? inject vitality into 注入活力

  ? negotiate every impediment 披荊斬棘

  Body 2

  However, I would also like to highlight that celebrities in sports and entertainment in fact play an equally essential role in another way. To illustrate, some may argue that it is unfair for sportsmen to be better paid, since they do not provide vital services. Football players, for example, earn enormous salaries by simply kicking a ball. However, such arguments can hold no water, as sports stars not only have dedicated hours of practice to developing their fitness and skills and often struggle with irreversible diseases in their later life but also have raised the fame of their nations by standing out in international games like Olympics. Regarding stars in entertainment, it is their works – movies, shows, or songs – that spice up people’s life especially during the period of lockdown, thus satisfying viewers’ spiritual demands.

  解析

  指出運動員和娛樂明星對社會的貢獻(滿足精神需求)以及面臨的風險。

  ? hold no water 站不住腳

  ? irreversible adj. 不可逆的;不可治愈的

  ? spice up v. 增添趣味

  ? lockdown n. 封城

  04

  In conclusion, contributions of neither professional workers nor staff in sports and entertainment should be ignored. Since different jobs are merely the results of social division of labour, individuals’ salaries, regardless of which domain they work in, should only hinge on their performance in their own fields

  解析

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